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Steps on how to be a good role model.
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Introduction
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What is a good role model, is a good role model someone who skips school or is it someone people looks up to for help. My role model is Fiao'o Fa'amausili when it comes to sports and my mum is my real role model.
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What my role models sound like. My role models always sound encouraging and happy, My mum is always positive towards my school work and sports. To me, my role models should always sound like this.
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How does your role model act ?, what does a role model do? Role models consistently act there age and they are always kind to one another. They show a good example to the younger ones. They are proud to be who they are.
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Role models are constantly generous to others and always keep their promises. Role models learn over time to overcome obstacles. Role models learn to accept other people and their differences.
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There are many role models within Pt England school. My role models at school are Mr Somerville and Whaea Kelly. Writing these simple steps have made me become a better role model.
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Showing posts with label olivia. Show all posts
Showing posts with label olivia. Show all posts
Wednesday, 25 October 2017
Steps on how to be a good role model.
Wednesday, 27 September 2017
Floundering Project!!!
Floundering Project!!!!!!!
Today our whole school went down by the Wai o Taiki Bay which is by our local beach. We had 12 kids from year 7&8 to try and catch at least 4 Flounder. We caught more than 20 baby flounder fish. We sang a few waiata and said a karakia to catch flounder
Sunday, 30 July 2017
Monday, 12 June 2017
Persuasive Writing - What is it?
WALT - Plan out a persuasive piece of writing
Today we wrote about how we think, feel and believe about a statement.
Sunday, 4 June 2017
All in the Family, Maths Wk 5
Walt - Collate, display and interpret data effectively.
This week we learnt about which graph is best to show our data, we also had to make a table using google sheets and make a grid which you will see in this presentation.
Sunday, 7 May 2017
Home Learning
Tuesday, 28 June 2016
Monday, 14 March 2016
Olivia Show Not Tell
WALT:Add detail to our writing by using descriptive language and write stories with complete orientation, problem and resolution.
Labels:
2016,
olivia,
Pt England School,
The runaway,
Writing
Monday, 22 February 2016
Olivia Writing a Narrative 2
Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.
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Title - What is the title of your story
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Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when. Captures the reader’s interest.
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Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
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Solution - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.
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Use the following table to plan your writing.
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The missing boy.
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One day in a gloomy forest there was a family of four. Their names were Elizabeth is the mum, Jeff is the dad, Naomi and Francis are brother and sister. Jeff and Francis have black hair are short . Elizabeth and Naomi have blonde hair . They all like to make jokes about each other. Francis likes to go wondering around. They went out for a hike in the forest.
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Then as they got half way through the forest the family realise that Francis had gone missing. They start calling his name out “Francis”.
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Then suddenly they heard a scream from behind them. They found Francis in a 6 feet hole. They grabbed his hand and pulled him out.
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Tuesday, 3 November 2015
WK3 Problem solving
WALT:Find a fraction of a number
Labels:
2015,
Fractions,
Math Problem solving,
olivia,
Term 4
Tuesday, 27 October 2015
Friday, 18 September 2015
Wk 3 Maths teacher lesson
WALT:Don't subtract add
This week we have been working with decimals. We learnt how to add and subtract decimals what I learnt was not to subtract add.
This week we have been working with decimals. We learnt how to add and subtract decimals what I learnt was not to subtract add.
Thursday, 17 September 2015
Team 4 Market Day
WALT: write an interesting and detailed recount
Last week we had a team 4 market day on friday aspart of the topic of the term Trade and enterprise. Everyone got to buy everyones product with PTs and peices. PTs and peices is our currency we have 20 pecies, 50 peices, 1 pt and 2 pt.
There are 6 different groups and they are Homeware, Toys, Kitchen, Jewelry, Custom stationery and Musical intruments. For Trade and Enterprise, my group is making food products so that means i’m in kitchen. We are making sweets like Cups of Hot chips. In my group are Tevita and me. We get on well together because we are best friends we also are off task sometimes but we get work done. We are hoping to sell 15 cups of Hot chips. Each cup of Hot chips is going to be sold for 2 PT.
To set up where we were going to cook we decided to set up by the class window because we needed to use the frying pan. We only used 2 desks. 1 desk was for the frying pan and the other desk was for all the PTs and the preparation.
When i went to go buy something from the trade and enterprise groups i bought a badge, pencil label and a sport maths book cover from the custom stationary and i also brought 11 loom band from the Jewelry and accessories, and i also brought 2 ice blocks from the kitchen.
Whan I was maning the station me and my buddy sold at least I think 12 cups of Hot Chips. We had only 1 full container and a half full container half of the chips were already in the frying pans. He had 1 customer miss out because we had sold out really fast.
The market day was very exiting because we all had lots of fun. we also bought lots of things like pencil label a drum loom bands slime and much more. The market day was the bomb.
Recount Writing
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Write for my reader
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I've tried to think about my reader
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My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
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My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
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My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
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Purpose
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I tried to meet the purpose
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My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
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The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
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My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
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Introduction
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My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
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My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
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My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction wows my reader!
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Paragraph Topics
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My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
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I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
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My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
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My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
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Task of description:
I have learnt how to make sense, and use proper English. I also had help with my friends, I learnt how to use language to make my recount more interesting. I made my story my interesting my using more new words. Please leave a comment or feedback.
Labels:
2015,
Market Day,
olivia,
Pt England School,
Room 6,
Writing
Tuesday, 8 September 2015
Diamante poem
Walt: write a poem using nouns, verbs, and adjectives.
Rugby
muddy,filthy
Running,tackling,chasing
exhausted.
I have learned how to do adjectives, Adverbs, verbs, and nouns in our own sentences i have done this for writing.
Wednesday, 2 September 2015
Adverbs
Walt: use adverbs and how to use them effectively.
I have been learning about adventurous adverbs.
We are learning to use adverbs and how to use them effectively.
Adventurous adverbs are adverbs that describe the action and so on.
We have been on a presentation that has a determiner,noun and verbs
I have been learning about adventurous adverbs.
We are learning to use adverbs and how to use them effectively.
Adventurous adverbs are adverbs that describe the action and so on.
We have been on a presentation that has a determiner,noun and verbs
Monday, 31 August 2015
Week 6 problem solving
WALT: multiply and divide decimal numbers.
Friday, 28 August 2015
Thursday, 27 August 2015
Advice blog
We had to do a advice blog about why we should get fitness watches. A made up person named James Abel was wanting some ideas about which fitness watch he should get. The fitness watches he wanted info about were the Garmin vivo fit 2 fitness watch and the Fitbit charge watch. For more info read the adivce.
Tuesday, 25 August 2015
Trade Fair
WALT: add one main idea per paragraph and Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.
Task of Description:
Today we learnt how to paint a picture in our readers mind, I also learnt how to use new vocab in our learning every day. The trade fair was a good example of our learning for our new Walt, it was pretty easy doing my work because it was good opportunity to experience. IT WAS FUN!!!
Task of Description:
Today we learnt how to paint a picture in our readers mind, I also learnt how to use new vocab in our learning every day. The trade fair was a good example of our learning for our new Walt, it was pretty easy doing my work because it was good opportunity to experience. IT WAS FUN!!!
Thursday, 13 August 2015
Maths teacher lesson week2
WALT: Add and subtract decimals
Last week in maths teacher lesson, we learnt how to add and subtract. We mostly looked at decimals and then we made them into fractions. For example; 2.4. The way I solve the question is by doing this; there is 2 and there 4/10, so if we add those together, it would equal to 2 and 4/10. So 2.4 in fractions would equal to 2 and 4/10's.
Last week in maths teacher lesson, we learnt how to add and subtract. We mostly looked at decimals and then we made them into fractions. For example; 2.4. The way I solve the question is by doing this; there is 2 and there 4/10, so if we add those together, it would equal to 2 and 4/10. So 2.4 in fractions would equal to 2 and 4/10's.
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