WALT: add one main idea per paragraph and Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.
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Today we learnt how to paint a picture in our readers mind, I also learnt how to use new vocab in our learning every day. The trade fair was a good example of our learning for our new Walt, it was pretty easy doing my work because it was good opportunity to experience. IT WAS FUN!!!
This content is written very well. Your use of formatting when making your points makes your observations very clear and easy to understand. Thank you. This content is written very well. Your use of formatting when making your points makes your observations very clear and easy to understand. Thank you.
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