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Monday 22 February 2016

Olivia Writing a Narrative 2

Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

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Title - What is the title of your story
O
Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
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Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
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Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.

Use the following table to plan your writing.


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The missing boy.
O
One day in a gloomy forest there was a family of four. Their names were Elizabeth is the mum, Jeff is the dad, Naomi and Francis are brother and sister. Jeff and Francis have black hair are short . Elizabeth and Naomi have blonde hair . They all like to make jokes about each other. Francis likes to go wondering around. They went out for a hike in the forest.
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Then as they got half way through the forest the family realise that Francis had gone missing. They start calling his name out “Francis”.
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Then suddenly they heard a scream from behind them. They found Francis in a 6 feet hole. They grabbed his hand and pulled him out.

Wednesday 3 February 2016

REFLECTION

In 2015 I learn't don't subtract add when you are working on a decimal when one number is bigger than the other. This year my goals are to achevie reading, writing and maths, my other goal is to be be a good leader