My effectve writing about Super Mario.

WALT:Write effective paraghraphs

I am going to tell you about a famous game that was played on nentindos and gameboy. This game is a fun sidescrolling game that we as kids at pt england school on our chromebooks and other different There are different species of this game like super mario world it is a computer game

The aim of the game is to clock the levels there are 15 levels to clock. To grow bigger you have to collect the mushrooms how you either run in to them or you jump on them. You have to dodge the eels they are your evil enemies. If you run into them you die and have to restart. You have to collect the stars.

Mario is a player that you play with most of the time in the games called Super mario or mario he can move around and jump and can grow bigger. What does he look like he looks short with a giant head he has light blue eyes and a black mastache. Mario wears a red hat with a white M on it he also wears a red long sleave t-shirt with an  dark blue denim overall and white gloves. Mario is italyian.

To play you have to play it on a keyboard. You have to use the arowws to move him around the up key is the key to jump. The aroww on the left hand side is to move backwards. The button on the right hand side is to move forward and the bottome key is to duck down. Here is some advice to help you when you grow bigger you can break through the bricks right first i did not know how to play the game but now i do i would not jump on to the platform with your evil enemie is close to you  i would jump on to the platform when it goes the other way to kill your evil little enemie you can jump on it so it dies.

I think this game is very addicting to me i would recomend it to kids from maybe 4-11 of age. What i like about this game is that its challenging because sometimes you cant win and you cant lose. My thoughts about the game was its just fun and it is  awseome. What i did not like about the game because every level will always be challenging if you want to play the game here is the link to the game.

Super Mario World

Task Desciption:
We learnt to write effective paraghraghs about mario.We all sat together and we wrote in silence. What the task was asking as was to write effective paraghraghs.